Hi Friends i'm sharing a real story of a girl with u. Its a long story n d story will continue through several posts. i'm not a writer and this is my 1st attempt 2 write sumthin. so plz let me know ur views.
The story starts with the birth of a girl child. the child is born after many complications and after completing full 10 months. the baby is post matured and overweight. parents are too happy specially the father, Mr. Sharma, who always wished for a girl. the chubby baby is wheatish-complexioned with big black eyes. next day the nurses show the baby to other patients and everyone is happy to see such a cute baby. as long as the baby stays there she becomes the darling of all people including the staff.
finally the baby comes home with her mother and is named Anshika by her dad. little anshika enjoys all the attention from the neighbours n relatives and starts growing in a lavish way. she is the hearththrob of the locality n family. everyone calls her Ashi. one year passes and her mom gets pregnant again. this time everybody expects a boy. time passes and the final day comes but again a girl is born. mom is a bit disappointed but when she and other family members see the child they are dumbstruck.
wat a beautiful creation of God! milky-white complexion, big eyes, red lips, extremely beautiful n cute. everybody forgets everything and fall over each other to take a look of the baby. she is named as Rupika and called as Rup, true to her name.
Wednesday, November 5, 2008
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The story has been kicked off well and i expected a very sentimental end of it. I think you can further write and give it a good shape and end it well.
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